Feedback

Other members of our class gave us this feedback to out rough cut...
MOOD/ATMOSPHERE? spooky, crime scene
OTHER FILMS IT RELATES TO? the film 'seven' in the way the newspaper text appears
WHAT HAPPENS IN THE OPENING? person is stalking..someone has been murdered, or about to get murdered
WHO ARE THE CHARACTERS? girl in the kitchen, man with hood, dead person.
WHAT QUESTIONS DO I STILL HAVE? who is the stalker an why were they killed?
GOOD EXAMPLES OF PROPS/SETTINGS? good settings, roof tops, newspaper, im[plies murder...cant see the whole story, adds mystery...dark figure? mysterious/dangerous?
PERFORMANCE? innocent victim...adds suspense..
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT? soundtrack needs to be added...and lengths of shots need to be edited. and put into order.
VISUAL STYLE OF SEQUENCE? dark images, quite disturbing.
EXAMPLE OF EDITING/LIGHTING? flash of images, filmed at night, eerie and effective.
MOST STRIKING IMAGE? boy walking accros road, sunset, mysterious, want to know where and why he's there...